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谢谢你的回复。
我不同意你的以下说法，即：英语原文是被动，那么汉语译文一般也要体现被动，虽然汉语里表示“被动”其实可以不用“被”的。
因为：
一、朗文双解5修订组的做法不支持你的说法
1. 5版删去4版译文中，用来表示“被动”的“被”字的例子(aback条)：
4版 For a moment, I was completely taken aback by her request. 一时间我完全被她的要求给震住了。
5版 For a moment, I was completely taken aback by her request. 一时间她的要求把我吓了一大跳。
2. 5版中有不少和4版一样，表示被动但不用“被”字的例句：
abolish
4版 Slavery was abolished in the US in the 19th century. 美国于 19 世纪废除了奴隶制。
5版 Slavery was abolished in the US in the 19th century. 美国于 19 世纪废除了奴隶制。
abrasion
4版 She was treated for cuts and abrasions. 她因割伤和擦伤而接受治疗。
5版 She was treated for cuts and abrasions. 她因划伤和擦伤而接受治疗。
abuse
4版 She was sexually abused as a child. 她小时候遭到过性虐待。
5版 She was sexually abused as a child. 她小时候遭到过性虐待。
treat_1
4版 The prisoners were well treated by their guards. 囚犯受到看守很好的对待。
5版 The prisoners were well treated by their guards. 囚犯受到看守很好的对待。
treat_2
4版 Nowadays, malaria can be treated with drugs. 如今，疟疾可以用药物医治。
5版 Nowadays, malaria can be treated with drugs. 如今，疟疾可以用药物医治。
treat_3
4版 sewage treated so that it can be used as fertilizer 经过处理作肥料使用的污水
5版 sewage treated so that it can be used as fertilizer 经过处理作肥料使用的污水
kidnap
4版 Police appealed for witnesses after a woman was kidnapped at gunpoint. 一名妇女遭到持枪绑架后，警方呼吁证人挺身而出。
5版 Police appealed for witnesses after a woman was kidnapped at gunpoint. 一名妇女遭到持枪绑架，警方呼吁目击者挺身而出。
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二、说话、写作文、搞文字创作，包括词典翻译等在内，可要可不要的字就不应当要，这样才通顺、简洁，这应当是大家的共识。
我相信你说话一定是经过深思熟虑的，一定有你的道理，4天过去了，没有看到你对我6楼帖子的回复，就先把我目前的理解写出来了，未必正确，期盼你能证明你的那句话是正确的。
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发表于 2017-3-8 10:46:24
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